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Her wrath resulted in a world broken and dead. It was devoid of life; of color; of humanity. Everything that made our world unique was destroyed as our oceans, once a testament to the awesome spectacle that was our little blue marble, were boiled away. Our atmosphere, formerly indigo, was replaced with the desolation of blackness. A blackness that tries my soul, for in that blackness is the memory of glorious sunsets, puffy clouds, and birds a myriad of colors and species.
Everything’s dead.
The vitriolic rain that fell dissolved anything it touched. Cities once thought beautiful, and hailed the pinnacle of mankind, were reduced to rubble. The world is now a replica of our lifeless moon: cratered, and without an atmosphere. When I close my eyes, and feel the edge of tomorrow, my dreams wail into the night. Thrashing with hope, my human brain defies the Nightmare in Blue.
I call her the Nightmare in Blue, when I’m sure she’s not watching, not because she’s clad in the color, but because she emits a pale blue glow when she bends me to her will. The glow is darkest around her cold dead eyes. Her mouth turned down in a perpetual frown. Never have I been so terrified of a child.
“Wake up, silly.”
The corners of my lips turn up. I expect to see my wife, her jovial smile easing me into the day. My beautiful Rosie with lips to match her moniker. I used to tease her because she preferred lavender perfume to her namesake. My eyes open, and if I weren’t strapped firmly to my couch, I might’ve jerked upright.
“I’ve got a surprise for you.”
I glance past the nightmare. I can see my dead world rotating below. I fight back the tears because I’ve ended my servitude to her so many times. She refuses to let me go. I thought for sure breaching the airlock would be the end. I hungrily consumed the vacuum. Sweet oblivion took only seconds after pressing the button on the cracked panel.
She brought me back, I think bitterly. Plastic grating against flesh was an easy fix for her. Drinking caustic chemicals was painful, but she brought me back again and again. Even the nothing of space was her domain.
She pulls the Velcro straps off, and my body drifts away from the couch. I cling to the thought of my Rosie. The lingering memory of her smile was just as desirable as the fine lines at the corners of her eyes from a lifetime of smiling.
“Now for your surprise,” the nightmare says in her child-like voice.
“Jorge?” The voice is unmistakable. My Rosie floats there in a smart business suit. She twists her long brown hair over trembling fingers.
“I’ve brought you someone to play with,” the nightmare replies, a smile eerily displayed on her cherub face.
“Can you bring back anyone?” I ask, my eyes never leaving my wife.
“Of course, silly.”
I nod and push off of my couch, my aim true. Rosie’s embrace is… well; I can’t describe the joyous rapture I feel after missing her for all these years. A plan forms as I squeeze my one true love. A plan that if successful, could restore the human race, and erase my years of servitude. Only if I can best the Nightmare in Blue.
August 28th, 2015 at 12:46
Very well done. Has a surreal quality throughout that definitely keeps you wondering as to what is and is not real.
August 28th, 2015 at 13:55
Thanks! I’m not gonna give you much time to rest on your laurels, vis-a-vis Brass Automaton.
August 28th, 2015 at 14:40
Nice! :-)
August 29th, 2015 at 15:50
Beautifully creepy! There is so much story hidden here and just enough to tease the whole way through. Nice job keeping it to 500(ish) and blending in so many different prompts!
August 29th, 2015 at 19:39
I had written to about 700 or so, but I trimmed it down to 500(ish). Thanks for the kind words.
August 30th, 2015 at 05:41
There is so much teeming underneath the surface of this story that I can’t wait to see what else comes of it. “I’ve brought you someone to play with,” brought Stephen King’s Pet Sematary to mind. Creepy, beautiful, and well-written, my friend.
August 30th, 2015 at 05:51
Thanks, Adan. I don’t know if this will be continued, though.
August 31st, 2015 at 18:09
Love it. Oh, love it! Beautiful imagery, interesting concept, and I love his determination to escape, by whatever means necessary. Nice to see a little hope at the end, too, though I have a feeling Rosie might not be what she seems.
August 31st, 2015 at 19:27
Thanks, Steph! Sometimes I just get lucky with a story.
September 3rd, 2015 at 15:55
I remember reading this! The story is terrifying yet brilliant. The reason I remember is that I stupidly blushed when I saw my name ;)
I await the book release… and you don’t sometimes get lucky. Everything you write shimmers. It is pure gold. I wish I had even half of your wordsmith talents ★★★★★
September 3rd, 2015 at 17:31
Shucks, Rosie. I’m glad you’re a Gardner fan.